A duck with a dream and a makeshift raft,
Set off on a journey that made others laugh.
"Tortoises aboard!" the duck did declare,
"Across this grand pond, I’ll get you there!"
The tortoises climbed, with patience galore,
Each slower than the one just before.
"Can we go yet?" quacked the duck in dismay,
"At this rate, we’ll leave by the end of the day!"
With a flap of her wings, she gave the raft a pull,
While the tortoises chuckled, their shells looking full.
"This is quite nice," said one with a yawn,
"I could sit here till the break of dawn!"
The duck rolled her eyes but kept pulling strong,
While the tortoises hummed their own little song.
Across the pond, through ripples and weeds,
She tugged her slow crew with admirable speed.
When they reached the far bank, the tortoises beamed,
"A duck with such grit, we never dreamed!"
But the duck just sighed, her feathers askew,
"Next time, I’ll stick to just paddling for two!"
Have a great day!
The poem is totally adorable!!! You always find the most whimsical things, the kind of things that I love.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you enjoyed it Ginny, thank you! I think you and I enjoy a lot of the same things :)
DeleteGreat story,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed it!!
Have a great day Denise!!!
Wonderful! Thank you so much Katerina :) You have a great day also.
DeleteWhat a beautiful and relaxing view! The poem is fun.
ReplyDeleteI have more relaxing views in my next post Angie. Glad you enjoyed this one :)
DeleteThe poem reads so well!
ReplyDeleteHappy you think so, thank you Roentare :)
DeleteLovely poem and great photo. I love both animals. Ducks are just so cool and goofy :-D
ReplyDeleteMuch appreciate your comment Ananka, thank you so much :)
DeleteHello Denise :)
ReplyDeleteYou find such amusing creature poems. If you are not sharing fun with birds, it's with bunnies or in this case ducks and tortoise. I absolutely love this poem, it brought out the child in me and made me smile.
All the best dear Denise.
Sonjia.
Hello Sonjia, thank you so much. I am happy you enjoy my animal posts. I am glad you feel the same way as I do. My inner child is very important to me. All the best to you too my friend :)
DeleteAn interesting poem indeed, Denise.
ReplyDeleteThank you Margaret, much appreciated :)
DeleteWhat a cute poem that is.
ReplyDeleteI am happy you think so, thank you Ann :)
DeleteI love the cute poem Denise. Great photo of the duck with the turtles.
ReplyDeleteTake care, enjoy your day!
Thank you Eileen, I appreciate your comments very much :) You take care and enjoy your day also :)
DeleteHow clever! Such a cute poem for your photo.
ReplyDeleteThank you Carole, happy you enjoyed :)
Deletethis is sweet, fun and I love it. I assume you wrote it since there is no author noted. great job
ReplyDeleteThank you Sandra, I had a little help from AI today as my brain wasn't cooperating with the creativity portion of my head ;)
DeleteA fun poem/story. Thanks for sharing it.
ReplyDeleteYou are very welcome Ivy, so glad you liked it :)
DeleteHave a wonderful weekend!
DeleteThank you Ivy, I hope you had a good one too :)
DeleteCute...
ReplyDeleteThank you Val, much appreciated :)
DeleteDenise excellent snap and you are a poetic and I know it.
ReplyDeleteHugs Cecilia
Ah Cecilia, my poetry had help today but I thank you so much :) Sending hugs!
DeleteHow sweet!!! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Cecilia, very kind of you to say so :)
DeleteLovely
ReplyDeleteThank you Christine :)
DeleteLove this.
ReplyDeleteWonderful! Thank you Sandra :)
DeleteWhat a lovely post :)
ReplyDeleteAll the best Jan
Much appreciated, thank you Jan and all the best to you too.
DeleteLindo poema. Me g usta la tortuga del final, Te mando un beso.
ReplyDeleteAgradezco mucho tu amable comentario. ¡Muchas gracias!
DeleteYou always share the cutest poems and quotes and pictures, Denise. You must have a whimsical side to you. I do as well. ; )
ReplyDelete~Sheri
Thank you Sheri, very happy you think so and yes, whimsy is definitely in my nature :) So nice to know we are kindred spirits.
DeleteA delightful poem. Thank you for sharing this here.
ReplyDeleteYou are very welcome Beverley, happy you enjoyed :)
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