Thursday, March 13, 2025

DUCKS AND TORTOISE AND A POEM


A duck with a dream and a makeshift raft,  

Set off on a journey that made others laugh.  

"Tortoises aboard!" the duck did declare,  

"Across this grand pond, I’ll get you there!"  


The tortoises climbed, with patience galore,  

Each slower than the one just before.  

"Can we go yet?" quacked the duck in dismay,  

"At this rate, we’ll leave by the end of the day!"  


With a flap of her wings, she gave the raft a pull,  

While the tortoises chuckled, their shells looking full.  

"This is quite nice," said one with a yawn,  

"I could sit here till the break of dawn!"  


The duck rolled her eyes but kept pulling strong,  

While the tortoises hummed their own little song.  

Across the pond, through ripples and weeds,  

She tugged her slow crew with admirable speed.  


When they reached the far bank, the tortoises beamed,  

"A duck with such grit, we never dreamed!"  

But the duck just sighed, her feathers askew,  

"Next time, I’ll stick to just paddling for two!"  



Have a great day!





44 comments:

  1. The poem is totally adorable!!! You always find the most whimsical things, the kind of things that I love.

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    1. I'm glad you enjoyed it Ginny, thank you! I think you and I enjoy a lot of the same things :)

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  2. Great story,
    I really enjoyed it!!
    Have a great day Denise!!!

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    1. Wonderful! Thank you so much Katerina :) You have a great day also.

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  3. What a beautiful and relaxing view! The poem is fun.

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    1. I have more relaxing views in my next post Angie. Glad you enjoyed this one :)

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  4. Lovely poem and great photo. I love both animals. Ducks are just so cool and goofy :-D

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    1. Much appreciate your comment Ananka, thank you so much :)

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  5. Hello Denise :)
    You find such amusing creature poems. If you are not sharing fun with birds, it's with bunnies or in this case ducks and tortoise. I absolutely love this poem, it brought out the child in me and made me smile.
    All the best dear Denise.
    Sonjia.

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    1. Hello Sonjia, thank you so much. I am happy you enjoy my animal posts. I am glad you feel the same way as I do. My inner child is very important to me. All the best to you too my friend :)

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  6. An interesting poem indeed, Denise.

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  7. I love the cute poem Denise. Great photo of the duck with the turtles.
    Take care, enjoy your day!

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    1. Thank you Eileen, I appreciate your comments very much :) You take care and enjoy your day also :)

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  8. this is sweet, fun and I love it. I assume you wrote it since there is no author noted. great job

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    1. Thank you Sandra, I had a little help from AI today as my brain wasn't cooperating with the creativity portion of my head ;)

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  9. A fun poem/story. Thanks for sharing it.

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    1. You are very welcome Ivy, so glad you liked it :)

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    2. Thank you Ivy, I hope you had a good one too :)

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  10. Denise excellent snap and you are a poetic and I know it.
    Hugs Cecilia

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    1. Ah Cecilia, my poetry had help today but I thank you so much :) Sending hugs!

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    1. Thank you Cecilia, very kind of you to say so :)

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    1. Much appreciated, thank you Jan and all the best to you too.

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  13. Lindo poema. Me g usta la tortuga del final, Te mando un beso.

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    1. Agradezco mucho tu amable comentario. ¡Muchas gracias!

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  14. You always share the cutest poems and quotes and pictures, Denise. You must have a whimsical side to you. I do as well. ; )

    ~Sheri

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    1. Thank you Sheri, very happy you think so and yes, whimsy is definitely in my nature :) So nice to know we are kindred spirits.

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  15. A delightful poem. Thank you for sharing this here.

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    1. You are very welcome Beverley, happy you enjoyed :)

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