And they said she was shy
She led from the front
And they hated her pride
They asked her advice
And then questioned her guidance
They branded her loud
And were shocked by her silence
When she shared no ambition
They said it was sad
So she told them her dreams
And they said she was mad
They told her they’d listen
Then covered their ears
And gave her a hug
Whilst they laughed at her fears
And she listened to all of it
Thinking she should
Be the girl they told her to be
Best as she could
But one day she asked
What was best for herself
Instead of trying
To please everyone else
So she walked to the forest
And stood with the trees
She heard the wind whisper
And dance with the leaves
And she spoke to the willow
The elm and the pine
And she told them what she’d been told
Time after time
She told them she never
Felt nearly enough
She was either too little
Or far, far too much
Too loud or too quiet
Too fierce or too weak
Too wise or too foolish
Too bold or too meek
Then she found a small clearing
Surrounded by firs
And she stopped and she heard
What the trees said to her
And she sat there for hours
Not wanting to leave
For the forest said nothing…
It just let her breathe
~Breathe by Becky Hemsley~
Becky Hemsley is an author I have only recently discovered and am so happy I did because when reading her poetry, I find myself saying, "Wow!" Becky lives in Leicestershire, UK, with her husband, two boys and their dog. She was formerly a primary school teacher for 15 years, but now writes full-time and has written four collections. The first - entitled 'Talking to the Wild', which features the poem 'Breathe'. Also, another book now which is a follow on, 'What the Wild Replied. I treated myself to these two books. She also has two further regular collections, and one of loss and grief poetry, as well as three children's books, one of which is an illustrated version of 'Breathe'). She is drawn to, and moved by, nature and its consistencies with human emotion (this I can attest to). In her words, "I often think the phrase 'human nature' is a good one to describe my thought process when writing. I aim to make a difference with words by helping people realize they are not alone." She really is an amazing poet!
I really like it. I am going to Amazon to check her out. I love nature poems.
ReplyDeleteWonderful Ginny, I'm glad you like her work :)
DeleteWhich of the two books do you like the best? The second one sounds a bit better to me?
ReplyDeleteRight now I can't compare Ginny. I am reading the first book at the moment. I like to go through them and read each one over and over again. I am a plodder :)
DeleteThe flower is really lovely and what a beautiful poem Denise, rather taken with it.
ReplyDeleteThat flower is definitely a favorite with me, thank you Margaret :)
DeleteThis is powerful, beautiful. And true.
ReplyDeleteVery much so, thank you Sue :)
DeleteI have read this poem before and I love it. Thanks for sharing it. I didn't realize she had books out. I'll have to go look for them.
ReplyDeleteThank you Ann and you are very welcome :) That's great you know the poem, it was new to me.
DeleteWhat a touching poem Denise. Thank you for introducing Becky Hemsley to me. I must check out her work.
ReplyDeleteI had the same reaction Martha Ellen, her words touched me too :) I am happy you enjoyed it enough to see more.
DeleteI've been reading her extraordinary poems--so heartfelt! Thank you again for her introduction. Have a cool weekend indoors, my friend!
DeleteSo happy you have been enjoying them Martha Ellen, I think they are as you say. You have a cool weekend also my friend and I am definitely staying indoors :)
DeleteIn my experience - which goes back a long way - there is nothing like the restorative power of a forest. Trees are underestimated; in fact unknown to many.
ReplyDeleteAnd mine also David, I feel so very much at peace among the trees :)
DeleteA lovely poem, thanks for sharing. Take care, have a wonderful day and happy weekend!
ReplyDeleteYou are very welcome Eileen, so happy you enjoyed it. Thank you and I wish you the same :)
DeleteThis poem is really beautiful and profound
ReplyDeleteTotally agree roentare, thank you :)
DeleteThank you for introducing this poet, Denise. The power of trees cannot be overstated.
ReplyDeleteYou are very welcome Janice and thank you :) I couldn't agree more!
Deletewild clapping! standing ovation! this is priceless and I needed to hear it. that is how trees and woods make me feel.. blessed peace and quiet
ReplyDeleteI am very happy you enjoyed this so enthusiastically Sandra :) We all need to hear such words at times and I feel the same way as you do about them.
DeleteAn inspiring poem! What kind of bloom is that? Saw lots of them here, but have no idea the name.
ReplyDeleteI am happy you enjoyed them Angie :) The bloom you mentioned and have seen is Goldencup St. John's Wort. You can read about it here: https://www.picturethisai.com/care/Hypericum_patulum.html
DeleteWonderful words
ReplyDeleteThank you Ashok, happy you enjoyed :)
DeleteWiersz jest piękny i prawdziwy. Czasami bardzo się staramy zaspokoić wymagania innych a zapominamy o sobie. Miłego weekendu:)
ReplyDeleteCieszę się, że wiersz przypadł Ci do gustu i bardzo się z Tobą zgadzam. Bardzo prawdziwe!
DeleteOhhh I do so like a surpise find like this. I've recently discovered new authors and love their books
ReplyDeleteHugs Cecilia
Delighted it surprised you Cecilia. There are times when I read something such as this that I go, "Ohhhhh!" So very touching! Thank you :)
DeleteShe has some very down to earth observations.
ReplyDeleteDidn't she? Thanks Red :)
Deletelovely!! a gorgeous image as well!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Debbie, much appreciated and so glad you liked this :)
DeleteAs you know I have been writing poetry again. And I must say thank you for introducing me to this poet who is so in sync in this poem with what I am trying to create. Also, I am always trying to make things shorter. And while it is important to get rid of extraneous matter, this poem shows me that length has its proper place as well. Thank you so much Dee for being such a wonderful companion. Aloha!
ReplyDeleteOh you are very welcome Cloudia and thank you for your ever so sweet comment. Yes, I have been enjoying your poetry very much. I know what you mean about the length. I look for much shorter ones but the more I read the more I knew I wanted to share. Some are like that aren't they? :) The words just speak to us.
DeleteThis is a lovely poem and good advice for us all. Your flower photo is a beautiful illustration.
ReplyDeleteThank you Jeanie, so glad you liked both poem and flower :)
DeleteThank yu for the nice poem an dbright yellow flower Both are so nice.
ReplyDeleteGreetings Aritha, you are very welcome to both and thank you. Makes me smile that you enjoyed them :)
DeleteOh Denise... This is so beautiful. Sad, beautiful and then peaceful.
ReplyDeleteI agree Kay, all those things. Thank you so much :)
DeleteThat’s a great poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Linda, I thought so too :)
DeleteFor once I read the full poem. So meaningful.
ReplyDeleteAnd she sat there for hours
Not wanting to leave
For the forest said nothing…
It just let her breathe
That’s wonderful! :) Beautiful lines I agree. Thank you!
DeleteIt is hard to describe how it makes me feel...but I so agree we need to take time just to breathe.
ReplyDeleteIndeed, I know what you mean Rose, we do and I totally agree :)
DeleteWonderful poem. Thank you for sharing x
ReplyDeleteHappy you enjoyed, thank you Beverley :)
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